Issue 1 Pages 10-11
I don’t know if it is gauche to admit it, but this sequence made me so giddy when I wrote it, and it still makes me giddy to read it. Munch munch munch. Sip Sip Sip.
I especially like the irising out in the last panel. Wherever I can, I try to add silent movie flourishes to the storytelling.
Where did the girl go? 😮
Haha, I like the style, it has that classic inked style but the action is pretty dynamic to read and the funny makes effect
She fainted and fell on the floor. Perhaps that needs to be more clear.
And I agree. Dexter’s inks are excellent.
I would love for this to be turned into a movie, but even in graphic novel form, it’s AWESOME!
Thanks for the compliment.
Who would you cast as Charlie, Errol and Hedy?
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